Editor

One of the weaknesses of The Wind at Dawn is the way that the characters of Gale's new friends in Montreal are not fully developed and feel somewhat stereotypical. The romance between Gale and Dawn is also not fully fleshed out, and the resolution of their relationship feels rushed and unsatisfying.

To improve the novel, I would suggest expanding on the relationships and motivations of the supporting characters, and deepening the romance between Gale and Dawn to make it more complex and realistic.